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:Aside from all this, you need more spellchecking. I want you to actually '''read''' through every last word you wrote. Read it out loud. If you do this, it will be pretty clear what doesn't make any sense or where the bad grammar is. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 20:47, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
::Okay, I fixed the errors that you pointed out. I may have labeled the powers a little off, but that was because I thought the powers are from a source of extraordinary power. I believe I caught most of the grammar errors too. Pleas look again. Please and thank you. Sorry about the hardend shadows 16 “16, part of an indigenous race, home was uprooted by invaders” thing. I was spellchecking checking spelling on a word document that I had already had stuff on it. And I should have the grammar fixed to day or tommarowused. - Dukelzan
