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:Aside from all this, you need more spellchecking. I want you to actually '''read''' through every last word you wrote. Read it out loud. If you do this, it will be pretty clear what doesn't make any sense or where the bad grammar is. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 20:47, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
::Sorry about the hardend shadows 16 thing. I was spellchecking on a word document that already had stuff on it. And I should have the grammar fixed to day or tommarow. - Dukelzan
