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Speeling.
That alone would have netted it a simple dislike, but on top of that, it comes with the whole Luigi package; a novel's worth of text and obtuse, overcomplicated and unnecessary mechanics.
You don't want to leave any loopholes? If that desire causes this bloated mess of writing, then LET GO OF IT ALREADY. Players will ''always'' find loopholes in spells or situations. Good DMs go into a game expecting it, and it's part of the fun of tabletopping. In the end, everyone is huddled around that table to have some fun, after all. You have a lot of interesting ideas, Luigi, but as it stands your style method of substance over style is the very sublimation of unfun-ness.
I'm not going to bother to rate all your spells like this. I don't have a lifetime to devote to reading everything you write. Just... try making some flowcharts for your spells, and see how ridiculous they end up looking.
