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::The more you write, the more chance there is for loopholes to appear. I find it hard to imagine anyone using this. Even if it was perfectly balanced, it's still so freaking long that it would grind the game to a screeching halt in the middle of combat as they have to suddenly read this legal document. --[[User:Dragonexx|Dragonexx]] ([[User talk:Dragonexx|talk]]) 00:11, 4 January 2015 (UTC)
:::I reread it again, and honestly, I don't see how it's too long. It's actually rather concise, considering what it does, how unique the effect is, and how thoroughly the effect needs to be explained given said uniqueness. It doesn't even grapple you; it bull-rushes you into an infinitely tight space, forming a ring of light around your body that holds you completely immobile. (I've written much worse stuff — [[Ukemi (3.5e Feat)|Ukemi]], [[Veles Whirl (3.5e Spell)|Veles Whirl]], and [[Ice Spike (3.5e Spell)|Ice Spike]] come to mind, and heck, I'll admit that [[Somewhere Over The Rainbow (3.5e Maneuver)|Somewhere Over The Rainbow]] ''might'' be a bit longer than it really needs to be.) This really isn't that bad. --[[User:Luigifan18|Luigifan18]] ([[User talk:Luigifan18|talk]]) 06:50, 2 December 2015 (UTC)
