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"The difference between bravery and stupidity is if the plan works" - Newrok Shadowblade, Saint of Creation in Shadowgate 20:39, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
:None of the class features say what type they are -- (Sp), (Ex), or (Su). Surely some of them should have a type.
:At the end of "Hardened Shadows" there is this: "16, part of an indigenous race, home was uprooted by invaders ". Not sure what that's about.
:Hardened Shadows -- no duration listed.
:Shadow Domain -- this is very confusing. Do they get the spell slots of a sorcerer of that level, or what? Explain this better.
:Shadowjump -- "The Darkblade gains a bonus equal to his Darkblade level ". Bonus to ''what''?
:Shadowhealing -- what type of action is this. How much regeneration and how is it bypassed?
:Shadowblow -- I have no idea what this is supposed to do; this ability makes no sense.
:Improved Shadowcall -- what is the "spontaneous conversion" rule?
:Aside from all this, you need more spellchecking. I want you to actually '''read''' through every last word you wrote. Read it out loud. If you do this, it will be pretty clear what doesn't make any sense or where the bad grammar is. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 20:47, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
