Changes

:::::You're a touch late. I've already changed the spell a bit according to Eiji-kun's suggestions, and it's now a bit simpler than it was... but I didn't follow Eiji's suggestions verbatim. Let me explain why. I refuse to take out the [[SRD:Jump Skill|Jump]] check, since it logically ''should'' be at least theoretically possible to jump over ''any'' wall that's not attached to a ceiling if you're good enough at jumping. (In practice, it might not be possible if you can't fit in the space between the wall and the ceiling, assuming that there ''is'' a ceiling, but that's the sort of environmentally-dependent situation that should be left for the DM to worry about.) Likewise, the ring should grow in height as your caster level increases to make jumping over the wall non-trivial at higher levels. Furthermore, the save for being crushed by the ring will remain a Fortitude save because Fortitude is all about withstanding physical trauma, and really, quick reflexes can't help you when you don't have enough room to move. Let's say you literally get trapped between the ''holy hold'' wall and some other walls, so that you ''can't'' run out of the way. In that scenario, a Reflex save can't help you; to prevent saving throw denial, I made Fortitude the default for when you get crushed. Likewise, the duration has to be long enough to carry the subject to prison and lock them up; ''holy hold''<nowiki>'</nowiki>s '''purpose''' is detaining people. I did, however, make the duration much shorter than it was before. And, of course, I didn't take out the ''time stop'' combo, as I came up with this spell ''specifically'' as something that would be made better by ''time stop''. I did, however, weaken the interaction a bit, namely changing it so that creatures subjected to ''time stop'' take a &minus;4 penalty on their save against ''holy hold'' instead of automatically failing. --[[User:Luigifan18|Luigifan18]] ([[User talk:Luigifan18|talk]]) 21:06, 3 December 2015 (UTC)