Difference between revisions of "User talk:Dukelzan/Darkblade (3.5e Class)"
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:You really need to differentiate, in the first paragraph, what makes a Darkblade different from a Rogue or Shadowdancer. Then you need to remove any <- and -> that remain in the page, and add in-page links. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 15:00, August 4, 2010 (UTC) | :You really need to differentiate, in the first paragraph, what makes a Darkblade different from a Rogue or Shadowdancer. Then you need to remove any <- and -> that remain in the page, and add in-page links. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 15:00, August 4, 2010 (UTC) | ||
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| + | ::Also, a spell-checker. You really, really need to use one. [[User:Surgo|Surgo]] 15:08, August 4, 2010 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 15:08, 4 August 2010
Please note that "Tweeking" means I'm done, just saying "Oh, this sentence sounds better like this" or "It's clearer when written like this"
"The difference between bravery and stupidity is if the plan works" - Newrok Shadowblade, Saint of Creation in Shadowgate 14:29, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
- You really need to differentiate, in the first paragraph, what makes a Darkblade different from a Rogue or Shadowdancer. Then you need to remove any <- and -> that remain in the page, and add in-page links. Surgo 15:00, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
- Also, a spell-checker. You really, really need to use one. Surgo 15:08, August 4, 2010 (UTC)
